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Ravine


I admit I have not written new poetry since high school, which was 13 years ago.

Ravine

As I stare at the ever widening ravine,
I wonder how shall I cross and live
If I survive, what awaits on the other side?
The uncertainty stops me and holds me
In a place of fear and discomfort.
I peer over the edge looking for a way down,
Hoping that a path will be revealed.
Suddenly the light from the full moon
Shines down and reveals the dark interior of the ravine.
I swoon with happiness when I see
That the ravine is not full of dangerous rocks
And animals, but a winding creek and meadow.
With a lightening heart and step,
I gladly follow the winding creek down the ravine.
Under the guidance of the light of the full moon,
Life seems less harrowing and full of promise and beauty.
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Nov/9/2008, 6:22 pm Link to this post  
 
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That's really lovely, Steel. You have obviously not lost the talent at all. I love the imagery.

Hugs,
Lynn

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"The best way out is always through."--Robert Frost
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love it emoticon
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